Tuesday Teaser 12/9/12: Wolf’s Prize
Oops! Really late again! Here’s a snip from Quill and Ellie’s book.
Paint nodded with satisfaction and patted Ellie’s arm. “Good girl.”
Rage roared through Quill. “Don’t touch my mate,” he snarled through clenched teeth.
Paint raised his hands. “Fine. Geez, you’re as bad as Snake.”
Ellie watched Paint retreat before lifting wide eyes to Quill. “Am I?” she asked quietly.
Quill took deep breaths to control his wolf. “Are you what?”
“Your mate?”
“Yeah.” That came out too roughly. Quill cleared his throat and gentled his voice. “Yes, you are.”
Tuesday Truth: Spinning is Cheap Therapy
When I say spinning I mean wool. Or silk. Or any other fiber. Not cycles. For me, cycling is an asthma attack waiting to happen. I’ll stick to my leisurely strolls on the treadmill.
No, I mean spinning fluffy fleece into beautiful thread and yarn. After a crappy day it helps me relax. There’s a certain rhythm to treadling to turn the wheel and feeding the roving through the oriface onto the bobbin. It’s soothing. It’s also a great time for me to plot out a story or a scene, and talk to my characters. Quill insists that living for five years in a house full of working girls has almost completely cured him of his shyness. Ellie needs a strong man to defend her now, and he, by golly, is that man. Ellie thinks he needs to back off a little. Yes, she needs him and the other wolves to help her get her son back, but she knows how to cook a meal over a fire, and doesn’t need his help to do it, thank you. If a spark leaps out and leaves a small burn on her hand she can handle it. Well … maybe he could kiss it better if he insists.
Here is a pic of my wheel. It is a castle style wheel from Kromski. her name is Zoya. I have commissioned a handmade saxony style wheel from a lovely gentleman in Wisconsin and I hope to have it by the end of February. He says it will get done when it gets done. Here is what I am currently spinning, a beautiful sparkly wool/silk blend in teals.
Tuesday Teaser: Eddie’s Prize
Here you go: a little snippet from Eddie’s Prize. This is a scene that takes place the night before the Bride Fights.
It was after midnight when Eddie crept on bare feet to the room Lisa and Carla had been given. His parents were finally in bed. They had stayed up late discussing the applicants for the Bride Fight, deciding who would be allowed to enter, but had banned him from joining the conversation.
The furious whispers coming from the women’s room fell silent when he tapped softly. After a moment, Carla voice said, “Who is it?”
“It’s me. Eddie. Can I come in? I want to talk to you.”
After a moment the door opened and Carla stepped back to let him in. She was dressed for bed, her still-damp brown hair in a braid down her back. Eddie looked past her to where Lisa sat hunched on the side of the bed, her blond hair glorious in the dim glow of the lamp, her pale face miserable. Her fingers pleated a corner of the sheet with jerky movements. Eddie wanted to hug her and tell her everything would be okay. Instead he put his hands in his jeans’ pockets and tried to smile.
“What do you want?” Carla asked rudely.
“Sh! Not so loud,” Eddie whispered. “Let’s not wake up my parents.”
“Are you supposed to be here?” Carla asked.
That made Eddie smile. “Of course not. I’m going to be fighting tomorrow. If the other men knew I was here they’d think I was taking unfair advantage.”
Carla’s glare could have parted his hair. “You’re fighting tomorrow? In this stupid Bride Fight thing?”
“Sh!” said Eddie again. “Yes, for Lisa.” Did that sound rude? “You’re very pretty too,” Eddie hurried to say. “But—”
Carla cut him off with the first real smile he’d seen from her. “That’s okay. I hope no one shows up to fight for me.”
Eddie remembered the dozens of men who had passed through his father’s office that evening, especially Taye Wolfe, who had stood with arms folded grimly over his chest for the entire visiting hour, glaring at each and every admiring comment made about Carla.
Eddie didn’t say anything. He looked over at Lisa. She had crumpled the sheet in one fist and was gazing at him pitifully. She reminded him of a half-drowned kitten. The prettiest, sweetest half-drowned kitten he could imagine.
Tuesday Truth: 11/20/12
Is it possible to have strep throat without a fever or even feeling really lousy?
On Friday around lunch time at work I felt like I had swallowed a peanut and it had gotten stuck halfway down my throat. I hurt a bit when I swallowed. By the time I left for home the side of my neck, right up under my jaw, was feeling a bit tender. By saturday, when I called my mom, the peanut had swollen into a sharp edged marble and my throat really hurt to swallow. But no fever, and other than the sore throat I felt fine. My mom, the retired nurse, told me to get my butt to the doctor right away. I was reluctant to spend more money at the doctor, but she was really insistent, so I went to the walk in clinic.
The doctor took one look at my throat and said it was strep. He took a culture, just to be sure, and it came back positive in a few minutes.
So, there you go: it is possible to have strep throat with no fever or even feel really lousy. I’m on the road to recovery. My throat is still a bit ouchy, but other than feeling really tired, I’m doing okay. I plan to get lots written this weekend on Ellie and Quill’s story.
Tuesday Teaser 11/13/12: Wolf’s Prize
Here is a little snip from Book 5. A man named Jeremy has been sent to Taye to tell him that his little cousin Ellie needs help. Enjoy!
The Wolfe compound was large and well guarded by a solid stone wall eight feet high. It looked to Jeremy like Mrs. Overdahl hadn’t exaggerated her cousin’s wealth. Only a man of means could hold a place like this. Jeremy presented himself at the gate and waited for the small reinforced window in the gate to open to ask his business.
The face in the small window was cold with suspicion. “Who are you and what do you want?”
“I’m Jeremy Potter, here on business from Mrs. Overdahl, Mr. Wolfe’s cousin. I have an urgent message from her.”
The gate was opened instantly and two very large dogs pressed against him, herding him into the compound. His horse came with him, snorting uneasily. A cluster of half-naked Native American men stood watching him. One of them looked him over.
“Give me all your weapons.”
Jeremy silently handed over his pistol and his knife, and waved a hand at the rifle in the saddle scabbard. “That’s all.”
The guy nodded. “Snake, Blaze, take him in to see the Chief. Paint, look after his horse.”
Two men flanked Jeremy like guards. When he got into a large room with a big fireplace he understood why he was being treated like a possible threat. Beside the fireplace sat a hugely pregnant woman with long brown hair. Standing protectively beside her on one side was a fiercely scowling man, and on the other side a three-year-old boy scowled just as fiercely. From the looks of their faces, they were obviously father and son. Several men lounged around the room, bodies appearing relaxed, but eyes keenly watchful. Their stares made Jeremy want to squirm. He turned his attention back to the man beside the woman.
“Mr. Wolfe?”Jeremy asked.
The man gave one sharp jerk of his head.
“I’m Jeremy Potter. I work for the Ryan Thomas Trading Company.” There Jeremy stalled briefly. “Your cousin, Mrs. Overdahl, sent me with a message for you.”
“Oh, thank goodness!” said the woman. “We haven’t heard from Ellie in ages. How is she?”
When Jeremy hesitated, the weight of the eyes on him grew heavier. “She’s well,” he said carefully. “But she needs your help.”
Taye Wolfe leaned forward, dark eyes hard under lowered brows. “What do you mean?”
Jeremy swallowed. “Her husband has died, and she has been sold to the Trading Company to be taken to Ellsworth. The men there are having a Bride Fight in a week or so …”
A snarl jerked Jeremy’s head around. He saw nothing but men with angry faces. No longer lounging in relaxed sprawls, they looked ready to spring. Most of the men were clearly Native American, but one of them had curly brown hair rather than straight black hair. He was on his feet, practically shaking. With rage? Jeremy was certain it was rage that clenched his fists and jaw. Jeremy hesitated before turning his back on the man.
Taye Wolfe’s set, angry face wasn’t any less scary. A bead of sweat rolled down the back of Jeremy’s neck.
“Where is my cousin?” Wolfe rasped.
Tuesday Truth: I Love My Crit Group
Back at the end of January 2011 I got an email from a woman named Tina Holland, inviting me to join a local critique group here in Fargo, ND. Boy, was I excited! I’d heard of Tina Holland. She was a romance author with Liquid Silver Books. I was going to meet a real, live romance author!
You see, I felt so alone and isolated from other writers. I had tried to join a local crit group a few years before, but sadly, that group was made of people who sneered at the romance genre. They were “real” writers. So I tucked my tail between my legs and went home. This one, I hoped, would be different. After all, Tina Holland was a romance author, too, and with years more experience in the publishing world than I had.
For the first few meetings, we were a little careful with one another. Some of us had never been in a crit group before and weren’t sure how to critique someone’s work. We didn’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings. There were seven of us, and we wrote in a few different genres, including poetry. We decided to call ourselves Word Weavers.
It wasn’t long before we learned how to critique effectively, but there were a few bumps along the way. We lost our leader due to health problems, and another woman left in a huff because she felt unappreciated. I believe she became increasingly unhappy as we learned to give tough critiques. Instead of just saying how much we loved this or that, we also began pointing out where improvements could be made. I don’t think she liked that.
When you’re a writer, you must learn to accept criticism. You may disagree with a critique, and that’s fine. You can say thank you and ignore it. But arguing and insulting the person who is giving the critique isn’t helpful. It’s taken us a little time, but my Word Weavers Crit Group has settled into a respectful and helpful groove. I really appreciate all their helpful advice. They have put up with my whining about Eddie’s Prize and helped me brainstorm through problems. They are sort of like cheerleaders, and sort of like mothers. They tell me I can do it, and they tell me I better do it. 🙂
To have a group of fellow writers to meet with is a great thing. I take my hat off to these ladies, who tell it to me like it is, and give it with a dose of praise.
Word Weavers:
Tina Holland – Erotic Romance Author
Mary Jean Adams – Historical Romance Author
Michelle Kent – Paranormal Romance Writer
Athena Hill Gracyk – Fantasy Writer/Poet
Kat Smith – Flash Fiction Writer/LARP game writer
Simone James – Contemporary Romance Writer
Tuesday Truth: Book Sale and Blog Hop-Win a Kindle Paperwhite
Thing #1: All Liquid Silver books are on sale 33% off at Kobo. That includes al of mine. Check it out!
http://www.kobobooks.com/romanceoffer
Thing #2: Win a Kindle Paperwhite plus a ton of other great prizes this weekend at the Bewitching Blog Hop. I will be giving away a cute little shawl that I knit myself.
Tuesday Teaser: Eddie’s Prize
This is from when Lisa is coming into Kearney for the first time. She and Carla are in a horse-drawn wagon a day after the plane crash.
Carla leaned toward Lisa. “Are you okay?” she asked with compassion. “Are you thinking about the little boy?”
Lisa nodded jerkily. Unlike some children she had encountered on planes, the four-year-old redhead sitting in the seat in front of her had been a perfect angel, quietly coloring and playing giggling peek-a-boo games with his mother. When the plane had finally come to its metallic screeching stop on the prairie, the mother was dead and the little boy so badly hurt that he could only cry almost soundlessly. Lisa had picked him up and numbly carried him out of the plane, allowing Carla to help her down to the ground, but never letting the boy go. She had hummed to him while he bled and cried and finally died. Lisa didn’t know what his last name had been. His mother had called him Alexander. All she had left of him was his blood on her clothes and the memory of his half-smile when he looked up at her right before he died.
That memory was too precious and too painful to linger on at this moment. There were other people counting on her and Carla now, those too hurt to go for help themselves, who needed doctors so they could live. The mayor of Kearney, Nebraska would get the crash survivors the help they needed. Even the crazy men from Odessa had done what they could to help by bringing them here. For the two hundredth time, Lisa forced her thoughts away from the crash to focus on the here and now.
She stared past the driver’s shoulder. “Is this an actual town? It looks as dilapidated as some of the abandoned houses we passed on our walk.”
Buildings looked like they had been half torn down and their windows taken away. There was a familiar fast food restaurant to their right, looking like it had been out of business for fifty years, abandoned for the elements to fade and wear away.
“The recession must have hit this area hard,” Carla suggested doubtfully.
Further in, roads became smoother, and it looked like efforts had been made to clean things up. They rolled past walls that separated whole blocks. The road went from dirt to something like cobblestones. The wagon seat bounced like a car with bad shocks. Even Carla, tough as she was, looked a little green. Lisa was afraid her lunch was going to escape. Soon they began seeing people, all men, come out of buildings and take notice of them.
“Women!” shouted one, pointing at the wagon.
Tuesday Truth: Maddy’s a Dork
I got my royalty check Monday and took it to the bank to deposit. The drive thru was closed so I had to go in. The young man who waited on me has helped me before. He’s always friendly, and I’ve always thought he was attractive. Tall, lean, broad-shouldered, with his dark blond hair in a messy Caesar cut. His face is handsome, but when he smiles … Knock out. Gorgeous. Drool-worthy.
Anyway, he looked at the check and casually asked if I worked for Atlantic Bridge Publishing. I said yes, I was an author. His baby blues popped and that heart stopping grin flashed out.
“What do you write?”
I tried to look modest, like I wasn’t molesting him with my eyes. That thin white dress shirt didn’t hide the fact that he is ripped. “I write romance. Werewolf romance. it’s pretty popular with readers.”
“Really? Do you do much research for that?”
I wondered if he meant the sex scenes. I said, straight-faced, “I’ve been trying to find a werewolf to interview, but they like to stay out of the public eye.”
He laughed, and it was all I could do to not blurt out what a great cover model he’d make. Oh, and by the way, if he’d like to pretend to be a werewolf, I’d love to do some research with him.
Are you proud of me? I kept it professional. I told him to have a nice day, dropped my change and had to crawl around on the floor, picking it up with what scant remnants of dignity I could muster. Then I went around the corner to buy a pound of fudge. I earned it.