Maddy Barone

Merry Christmas! A Deleted Scene from Eddie’s Prize

My Tuesday Teaser this week is from Eddie’s Prize, but since it didn’t move Eddie and Lisa’s story forward, it has been removed from the manuscript. That made it the perfect Christmas present for my readers. Let me give you a little set up here. It is early November and Lisa is at the den to visit Carla. Eddie dropped her off there on his way north to visit a friend. The two women are sitting in the room that connects to Carla and Taye’s bedroom. Taye set it aside for Carla’s sole use. As they are sitting and talking about what their married lives are like, Sky comes to the den with Rose, whom he rescued from Two Bears.

     Carla cocked her head to listen to a distant howl. “Is that Taye? Already?” She glanced at her watch. “It’s only half past four. Maybe he finished hunting early.”
     But it wasn’t Taye. Agitated voices sounded in the hall, getting closer to the listening women, and a peremptory knock sounded before the door was flung open to admit a tangle of bodies. They poured in like cats dumped out of a sack, all bristling fur, claws and yowls.
     Lisa felt bombarded by the invasion, staring at the people flooding into the room without comprehension at first glance of who they were or even how many there were. To settle herself, Lisa counted them. There was a man a little older than she was, tall and muscular, and barely dressed in cut offs, with black hair loose to his waist. He stood to one side of the door with arms folded over his chest and a grim scowl on his face. Snake hovered beside him, but he looked wide-eyed and anxious rather than grim. A third man wore leather clothes like an Indian in a cowboy movie and his black hair was in two braids. His nose might have had a proud Roman arch at one time, but was grossly bruised and swollen now. He seemed to be under the angry guard of two men who must be wolves who’d recently changed back to man form, because they were naked. Lisa would have liked to examine their fine physiques at her leisure, but, remembering Eddie’s little lecture, she forced her eyes to the couple who seemed to be the center of this ruckus.
     The man of the pair wasn’t actually a man, but a teen-aged boy dressed only in a dark blue wool breechcloth and leather moccasins. His nicely developed body said he was full grown, but his handsome face held a soft boyishness that said high school. His arm was around a young woman, his body leaning toward her as if to shelter her. In contrast to the long black hair that streamed over the young man’s brown-skinned back, the woman’s hair was short and blond, and her skin was the pale sort that probably burned lobster-red after only minutes in the sun. He was tall and slimly muscular, and moved with protective grace. She was of middle height, and her long limbs reminded Lisa of Alexander the colt’s gawky stick legs. Lisa guessed neither of them was over eighteen. The boy pulled the girl further into the room, toward the couch where she and Carla sat.

 

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Merry Christmas!

 

Good Bye, Magic Cat

My Tuesday Truth today is: Black Magic Cat has fallen asleep, never to wake again.

Magic Cat

I found Magic at the local Humane Society and fell in love with her. I brought her home on December 18, 2004. For eight years she was my writing companion. She was the friendliest cat I’ve ever known. She never met a person or a bowl of food she didn’t like. When I adopted her, I was told she was about 5 or 6 years old. She had health problems from the start, and about two months ago she had a stroke. The vet said then that it was only a matter of time before she died. Yesterday she seemed to lose control of her bodily functions. Today I brought her into the vet, and Dr. Tammy said Magic would never improve. It was my choice, but she said I had to consider Magic’s quality of life. It was hard, but I decided to have Magic put to sleep. I held her and petted her while she fell peacefully asleep. I will miss her. I had already decided that Rose will have a cat in Wolf’s Princess. Don’t be surprised if the cat is named Magic.

Tuesday Teaser 12/9/12: Wolf’s Prize

Oops! Really late again! Here’s a snip from Quill and Ellie’s book.

     Paint nodded with satisfaction and patted Ellie’s arm. “Good girl.”

     Rage roared through Quill. “Don’t touch my mate,” he snarled through clenched teeth.

     Paint raised his hands. “Fine. Geez, you’re as bad as Snake.”

     Ellie watched Paint retreat before lifting wide eyes to Quill. “Am I?” she asked quietly.

     Quill took deep breaths to control his wolf. “Are you what?”

     “Your mate?”

     “Yeah.” That came out too roughly. Quill cleared his throat and gentled his voice. “Yes, you are.”

Eddie’s Prize News

I filled out and returned the Cover Art Request Form last night for Eddie’s Prize. It will be several weeks to a couple of months before I get anything back. I’m looking forward to what my artist will come up with! I’m also working on polishing the blurb. Sometimes I think writing a blurb is harder than writing the book! Here is what I have so far:

     Lisa Anton was a world-famous fashion model before her plane crashed in a post-apocalyptic future where women are precious and rare, and technology is only a memory. She’s offered as a prize in a Bride Fight for the best fighter to take home. As the wife of a man she barely knows, one as handsome as any model she ever worked with in the past, Lisa believes she may have a chance at true love. Not only gorgeous and passionate in bed, her new husband also seems to care for her.

      From the moment he saw the blond beauty, Eddie Madison was determined to make her his wife. Beating a dozen other men in the Bride Fight was child’s play for him. Learning to be a husband is a bit trickier. She wants his complete trust, but Eddie has spent his entire life guarding a secret that could destroy their happiness. Is protecting his secret more important than winning his bride’s love?

This morning when I woke up I had an email from the Managing Editor at LSB letting me know that Eddie’s Prize was scheduled for release on March 18, 2013. That’s only a little over 3 months away!

I am working away on Wolf’s Prize. It seems Quill has lost his shyness and most of his sweetness. Living in Sin City for 5 years will do that to a guy, I guess. And though Ellie is still quiet, she is a tigress where her son’s safety is concerned. Quill’s wolf adores her. I’m having fun writing this one. Stay tuned for more news.

Tuesday Truth: Spinning is Cheap Therapy

When I say spinning I mean wool. Or silk. Or any other fiber. Not cycles. For me, cycling is an asthma attack waiting to happen. I’ll stick to my leisurely strolls on the treadmill.

No, I mean spinning fluffy fleece into beautiful thread and yarn. After a crappy day it helps me relax. There’s a certain rhythm to treadling to turn the wheel and feeding the roving through the oriface onto the bobbin. It’s soothing. It’s also a great time for me to plot out a story or a scene, and talk to my characters. Quill insists that living for five years in a house full of working girls has almost completely cured him of his shyness. Ellie needs a strong man to defend her now, and he, by golly, is that man. Ellie thinks he needs to back off a little. Yes, she needs him and the other wolves to help her get her son back, but she knows how to cook a meal over a fire, and doesn’t need his help to do it, thank you. If a spark leaps out and leaves a small burn on her hand she can handle it. Well … maybe he could kiss it better if he insists.

Here is a pic of my wheel. It is a castle style wheel from Kromski. her name is Zoya. I have commissioned a handmade saxony style wheel from a lovely gentleman in Wisconsin and I hope to have it by the end of February. He says it will get done when it gets done. Here is what I am currently spinning, a beautiful sparkly wool/silk blend in teals.

Saturday Crafting

I finished knitting a hat this morning. It’s a cute cloche but it turned out too big. I tried to felt it down to a smaller size. I was semi-successful. At least my cheeks and the back of my neck should be protected from the cold wind when I walk to work, right?

   

 

I’ve also been knitting a lacy little shoulder shawl, possibly as a giveaway during the Naughty New Year’s blog hop coming up the last week in December. It would be pretty light, more decorative than warm. I call it chocolate cherry, because the colors are light brown, chocolate brown, cheery pink and soft pink.

 

This is what it looks like now.                         Here is another one I made from the same pattern.

 

Right now it looks like a snarled mess. But that’s okay. Lace usually looks like a snarled mess until it’s blocked. What do you think? Would people like to win a lacy little shawl? Or should I concentrate on giving books away?

Tuesday Teaser: Eddie’s Prize

Here you go: a little snippet from Eddie’s Prize. This is a scene that takes place the night before the Bride Fights.

 

      It was after midnight when Eddie crept on bare feet to the room Lisa and Carla had been given. His parents were finally in bed. They had stayed up late discussing the applicants for the Bride Fight, deciding who would be allowed to enter, but had banned him from joining the conversation.

      The furious whispers coming from the women’s room fell silent when he tapped softly. After a moment, Carla voice said, “Who is it?”

      “It’s me. Eddie. Can I come in? I want to talk to you.”

      After a moment the door opened and Carla stepped back to let him in. She was dressed for bed, her still-damp brown hair in a braid down her back. Eddie looked past her to where Lisa sat hunched on the side of the bed, her blond hair glorious in the dim glow of the lamp, her pale face miserable. Her fingers pleated a corner of the sheet with jerky movements. Eddie wanted to hug her and tell her everything would be okay. Instead he put his hands in his jeans’ pockets and tried to smile.

      “What do you want?” Carla asked rudely.

      “Sh! Not so loud,” Eddie whispered. “Let’s not wake up my parents.”

      “Are you supposed to be here?” Carla asked.

      That made Eddie smile. “Of course not. I’m going to be fighting tomorrow. If the other men knew I was here they’d think I was taking unfair advantage.”

      Carla’s glare could have parted his hair. “You’re fighting tomorrow? In this stupid Bride Fight thing?”

      “Sh!” said Eddie again. “Yes, for Lisa.” Did that sound rude? “You’re very pretty too,” Eddie hurried to say. “But—”

      Carla cut him off with the first real smile he’d seen from her. “That’s okay. I hope no one shows up to fight for me.”

      Eddie remembered the dozens of men who had passed through his father’s office that evening, especially Taye Wolfe, who had stood with arms folded grimly over his chest for the entire visiting hour, glaring at each and every admiring comment made about Carla.

      Eddie didn’t say anything. He looked over at Lisa. She had crumpled the sheet in one fist and was gazing at him pitifully. She reminded him of a half-drowned kitten. The prettiest, sweetest half-drowned kitten he could imagine.

 

A Good Weekend

     I love four day weekends. But you know, I’m not sure four days off is enough. I am SO JEALOUS of my friend Jessica, who took Monday and Tuesday off too.

     On Thursday morning I baked a blueberry pie before going and spending 8 hours at my mom’s house. On Wednesday we broke the record for the high temperature. It got up to 59F! Thursday started out pretty nice, but by the time I left my mom’s house at 5:30 pm I could barely see the road because of blowing snow. Gotta love North Dakota weather. You know what they say: if you don’t like the weather, wait a minute. It’ll change.

     On Friday I cleaned my sewing/craft/guest bedroom. Wow, did I have a lot of stuff. I still have a lot of stuff, but at least now I can find it! That was a lot of work, and I haven’t touched the closet yet. But for now this is good enough. When my brother comes to stay for Christmas he’ll be able to walk to the bed instead of crawling over stuff.

     This morning I did a little Christmas shopping. Normally I wouldnt be caught dead shopping the weekend after Thanksgiving. With all due respect for those who consider Black Friday a sporting event that they have taken the gold in, I hate shopping. But I managed to pick up a couple of things for the Toys For Tots and other charity giving. My family is really tough, tho. No spoilers here, in case they are reading.

     This afternoon I signed the contract for Eddie’s Prize. Don’t have any further info yet, like a release date, but that will come in a month or two. I would estimate (purely a guess here) that it will be available sometime around the end of March or beginning of April. It depends on how many revisions and editing passes it requires, and what the publisher’s schedule allows.

     Tomorrow I expect to be a quiet, lazy day. I have church, then a couple of loads of laundry, followed by some reading for my critique group and then knitting with the gals. I have to get going on that afghan that I’m giving away in a few months to celebrate the release of Eddie’s Prize.  In the evening I’ll go back to working on Wolf’s Prize. Hey, a question. Jelly is about 19 in this book, and has completed his vision quest and received his adult name. I was going to call him Spotted Wolf, but then what would his nickname be? Spot is cute, and leads to great opportunities for humor, but … yeah. So then I thought of Stone Wolf. What do you think? Oh, by the way, in Wolf’s Prize he meets the girl who his wolf chooses for his mate.

     Thanks for reading!

 

 

 

The Next Big Thing-Eddie’s Prize

I was tagged by my friend Suzanna Medeiros, author of historical romance, to participate in The Next Big Thing series. Last week she posted about her current Work in Progress, Loving the Marquess. You can follow this link to read her post.

 

The Next Big Thing is a blog hop of sorts wherein a writer is given the opportunity to answer ten questions about their current work in progress or a work that is already published. They then tag some more people, who will post about their respective WIPs the following week and pass this invitation on to other writers to keep The Next Big Thing going. I have asked Tina Holland and Mary Jean Adams from my local crit group, and Karlene Clark from a neighboring city (only 70 miles away is neighboring in North Dakota!), to join The Next Big Thing and make posts next week. Be sure to check them out next Wednesday!

 

Ready to find out more of what I’m working on right now? Here we go!

10 Questions:

What is the working title of your book?

Eddie’s Prize

 

Where did the idea come from for the book?

My head. I have 6-7 hours a day to zone out while doing boring repetitive work on the computer at the day job.

 

What genre does your book fall under?

Paranormal Romance is the broad genre, but it is also post-apocalyptic, time travel and futuristic.

 

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie?

Eddie, the hero, is easy. I imagine Travis Fimmell as Eddie. Lisa is slender, blond, and beautiful, which could be any number of actresses. I don’t know who this lady is, but she’s a dead ringer for Lisa.

  

 

What is a one sentence synopsis of your book?

Transported to a post-apocalyptic future where women are scarce, Lisa finds herself married to a gorgeous stranger.

 

Will your book be self published or represented by an agency?

The other books in the series are published by Liquid Silver Books.

 

How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?

Way, WAY too long. I had trouble with this one because I wasn’t sure where to start it. Should I skip for the first several months, since they had been covered in the previous books? No, I decided, then readers might not understand Lisa’s feelings. I started it, deleted, and started again half a dozen times. It’s at the publisher right now, for them to review and decide if they like it as is or if changes need to be made.

 

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre.

I feel a little uncomfortable comparing my writing to anyone else. If they are way better than me (and they probably are, since I’m still pretty new at writing for an audience), then I feel presumptuous. If they are even newer than I am at professional writing, then I feel like I’m being condescending. So I guess I’ll just skip this question.

 

Who or What inspired you to write this book?

A girl I work with is named Lisa Hill. We were (and still are!) so stressed out at work that as a joke, I began writing crazy love stories to perk us up.  It just sort of took off. I had no plans to get them published, but Lisa and others nagged me– No, not nagged. They encouraged me to submit the first one. I did, not expecting it to be accepted. Now this is book 4 in the series.

 

What else about your book might interest the reader?

If you like stories where women are considered precious becauSe of their rarity, you might like this series. If you’ve read the other books in the series, you might like to see how previous characters are doing.

 

Mini Excerpt:

      A couple of men came out onto the wide covered porch. The wagon stopped about ten yards from them. One of the men, big-bellied with brown hair and a grizzled, graying beard, came down the steps to stand a few yards away from the wagon.

      One of the Odessa guards stepped forward to shake the man’s hand. “Mayor Madison,” he said loudly, and then lowered his voice to speak further.

      Lisa exchanged a half-laughing, half-horrified look with Carla. Mayor? He looked like a beer-bellied, aging hippy with a hangover. Carla stood up and swung herself over the side of the wagon, landing on the dirt driveway with easy grace. Lisa doubted she could do that even if her feet hadn’t been killing her.

      The second man flowed down the steps with the lithe grace of a cat and when the sun hit him Lisa caught her breath. His hair was golden, a halo of waves around his face. His face was elegant, sun-kissed to a creamy golden tan, perfect in each clear-cut feature. As a model, Lisa had worked with many handsome men, but none of them could top this one. Such beautiful blue-green eyes with dark lush lashes shouldn’t belong to a man. That wide, gracefully curving, kissable mouth made Lisa wonder what he would taste like. He could almost be called pretty, except that his jaw was hard, his chin square and his shoulders broad.

Tuesday Truth: 11/20/12

Is it possible to have strep throat without a fever or even feeling really lousy?

On Friday around lunch time at work I felt like I had swallowed a peanut and it had gotten stuck halfway down my throat. I hurt a bit when I swallowed. By the time I left for home the side of my neck, right up under my jaw, was feeling a bit tender. By saturday, when I called my mom, the peanut had swollen into a sharp edged marble and my throat really hurt to swallow. But no fever, and other than the sore throat I felt fine. My mom, the retired nurse, told me to get my butt to the doctor right away. I was reluctant to spend more money at the doctor, but she was really insistent, so I went to the walk in clinic.

The doctor took one look at my throat and said it was strep. He took a culture, just to be sure, and it came back positive in a few minutes.

So, there you go: it is possible to have strep throat with no fever or even feel really lousy. I’m on the road to recovery. My throat is still a bit ouchy, but other than feeling really tired, I’m doing okay. I plan to get lots written this weekend on Ellie and Quill’s story.