Tuesday Teaser 4/2/13 Quill & Ellie’s Wedding Night
There. That got your attention, didn’t it? đ
Here is a scene from Quill and Ellie’s wedding night. They’ve consumated their marriage and are lying side by side in bed. He’s been telling her what he and Sky have been  doing in Omaha. This scene may be changed significantly or even cut entirely from the book. I haven’t even re-read it yet so it probably has awkward moments and goofs.
     “Omaha sounds awful.” Ellie shivered against him. âI donât understand why the women allow themselves to made into prostitutes. Canât their families protect them?â
That very question had driven his wolf insane for six years. âThe city guard is like an army, and the mayor is its commander. People donât have much choice. If they are wealthy, they can pay the tax to keep their daughters at home or to find them a husband and pay the marriage fee.  Poor families who try to resist find their homes burned.” Quill had to make an effrot to keep his wolf from howling his rage. “And a lot of women like being prostitutes. They have independence and money, and a lot of them like having sex.â
âEw,â Ellie shuddered.
Horrified, he lifted his head to stare at her. She hadn’t seeemed unhappy a few mintues ago. âDonât you like sex?â
âWith you. Not just any stranger off the street.â
That laid a sheet of soothing warmth over his heart. âWell, some of the women do. The ones who donât, try to come to Ms. Maryâs house. We arrange some domestic work for them and pay their city tax out of the houseâs cut.â
Ellie leaned up on one elbow, trying to see him in the scant moonlight. âHow can the house make a profit?â
âIt doesnât. Ms. Mary made Sky her partner, and all they want is enough to keep things going until they âŠâ He trailed off, debating whether or not to tell her the whole truth. He tugged her face to his and sunk his voice to the barest whisper in her ear. âUntil they are able to get rid of the mayor. Donât tell anyone. If the mayor somehow heard that, he would have Sky killed.â
âSky should come home!â
âBut then who would take care of the ladies at Ms. Maryâs house? They’re his Packâ
Her small fist thumped lightly on his shoulder. âI donât advocate violence, but why doesnât he just kill the mayor?â
The thought of the chaos that would erupt as various factions fought for power in Omaha made him cringe. âToo many innocent people would die unless there was someone strong enough to take control.â
âIs that what Sky wants? To be the next mayor?â
âNo.â He and Sky had talked that over several times. Sky didnât want to stay in Omaha; he wanted the plains and the hills and his mate. âHe wants a strong and fair government in place in Omaha. Heâll be back when he has that. He wants his mate. I can’t tell you how many nights he and I stayed up ’til dawn talking about you and Rose and how much our wolves needed you.â
She gave a lady-like grunt. âHe could bring Rose to Omaha.â
âNo.â That was definite. âOmaha is an evil place. I wouldnât want my mate there. I hope you never want to go to Omaha. It would half-kill me to deny you anything, but–â
She laid her head on his shoulder, snugglingclose. âArenât you lucky? Iâm right here.â A shadow of a laugh shook her voice. âWhy donât you show me what else you learned while you were guarding ladies in Omaha?â
Relief shook him. She didnât hold his days in an Omaha whorehouse against him.
Steampunk!
My one and (so far) only steampunk outfit.
What do you think?
Tuesday Teaser Feb 19: Wolf’s Prize
Late as usual, but better late than never, right? Here is a snip from Ellie and Quill’s story.
After they ate, Quill spoke to the men in a low voice. A few glances were directed her way, accompanied by nods and smiles. In only a few minutes most of the men melted into the darkness, taking Tommy and Connor with them. Only Snake and Stone stayed to watch over Sara and Mel while they cleaned the dishes. Ellie moved to join them, but Quill stepped in front of her.
âLetâs walk for a few minutes before bed.â
Ellie swallowed and nodded. They were alone. It didnât frighten her, exactly. She draped the blanket over her shoulders like a wrap against the chilly air of the evening and walked beside him out of their small camp. âWhere did everyone go?â
He put an arm around her waist. âTheyâre not far. I asked them to give us a little time alone.â
Alone. In the dark. With Quill. Ellie tried to slow her breathing. âWhy?â
He pulled her to a stop and lifted her hands to his mouth to kiss each palm.âYou know why. You brought a blanket.â
Teaser Tuesday, Feb 12
Eddie’s Prize comes out in a little over a month. At last! I am hoping to be able to show off the cover art soon. I saw the first draft of it and I think it is beautiful.
Here is a snip from Eddie’s Prize. Christmas Eve 2064:
Eddie washed dishes as she tidied up the kitchen. Through the kitchen window Lisa could see snow falling through the dark night. It was a scene out of an old fashioned Christmas card.
âItâs pretty,â she said. At Eddieâs raised brow she elaborated. âThe snow. We didnât get snow in California. It makes it seem a little more like Christmas.â
He hung up the dish towel to dry. âItâs Christmas Eve. Our first Christmas together.â His kiss was gentle. âI know you were a little disappointed to not be able to go see your friend, but I wanted you to myself this time.â
Lisaâs hands framed his face. âCarla is a good friend, but Christmas is for families. Youâre my family.â
âCome to bed,â he breathed.
She giggled when he swept her up and carried her to their bed. âI should brush my teeth before bed,â she mock protested.
âTomorrow.â He peeled her clothes off her with careful haste.
She kicked her feet to rid her legs of the jeans still clinging. âI should wash my face,â she teased.
He made short work of his own clothing. âTomorrow,â he repeated.
Tuesday Truth February 5, 2013: I’m busy!
Ack!!! I’m busy!
First, I’m buried in edits again. These are tough, and I have some re-writing to do, but I think Eddie’s Prize will be a far better book in the end.
Second, I am in the beginning stages of organizing an SCA event called Silks & Needles. It will be a day of classes on embroidery, weaving, spinning, etc. Tomorrow night is the Shire meeting where I need to present my budget. So, I guess I better get my budget smoothed out.
Third, my brother is coming to stay for the weekend. He’ll be here Friday. That means I need to CLEAN! He’s coming because …
Fourth, it’s my mom’s birthday party on Saturday night.
Did I mention I was busy?
Tuesday Truth: the Giveaway is Coming!
I am going to be having a set of giveaways to celebrate the release of Eddie’s Prize!
What am I giving away? Well, for starters, an afghan (made by me. See on the left? It’s almost done!) based on the one Lisa crochets in Eddie’s Prize, a sterling silver skeleton key on a fine chain (because my tagline is “Unlock Your Imagination”) coffee and mugs, chocolate delicacies locally made right here in Fargo ND,  and, of course, an ARC of Eddie’s Prize. Actually, I’ll be giving away a couple of ARCs.
When will this be? It will start on or around February 28, 2013
How do you enter?  These giveaways will be through my newsletter only. I send out a newsletter only about every other month. At the end of February I will send out an e-form you can use to enter the giveaway. If you’re not a member of my newsletter and you’d like to sign up you can click here.
Tuesday Teaser, January 15, 2013
I’ve been hard at work on edits for Eddie’s Prize. I’ve turned in the first round, but they aren’t done yet. Here is a little snip of the first time Lisa and Eddie go to visit Carla and Taye at the den.
Those guards sauntered over to meet them at the gate. One had short dark brown hair and a thick muscular wrestlerâs build. The other was young, with a slight limp.
Eddie looked at the men behind the gate. âIâm Eddie Madison.â
âWe know who you are.â
The younger guard sounded almost insolent. Lisa could feel Eddieâs annoyance in the way his hand tightened on her arm. âTaye Wolfe told me I could bring my wife to visit Mrs. Wolfe.â
âThe Chief ainât here.â
The burlier of the two guards elbowed the younger one. âPipe down, Chad. Taye told us Mrs. Madison was welcome anytime.â He raised his voice to say, âHey, Snake! Come here. Walk Mrs. Madison into the den. Sheâs here to visit the Lupa.â
One of the dogs loped over. Lisa blinked, realizing that it wasnât a dog when a weird shimmer went over its fur and the fur … disappeared. A man stood in the dogâs place, a handsome man with long, dark curly hair whose muscular physique was completely bare. Lisa jolted in shock, but couldnât help but run her gaze approvingly over his naked body.
Tuesday Truth: Edits
I received my edits for Eddie’s Prize last night, so I’ll be busy editing rather than writing for the next week.
Some of my author friends tell me editing can be the hardest part of writing. A lot of writers dread doing edits. Personally, I love edits. Edits correct my punctuation and grammar. (Seems like no matter how hard I try, I always need a ton of corrections when it comes to punctuation) Edits help me see what I can improve. Edits make my story better.
That’s not to say that I don’t quail when I open the file and see all the red. And that’s not to say that I agree with every suggestion my editor makes. I suspect that most writers are a little sensitive when it comes to our “babies”. These stories are part of us, pieces of our hearts, so it’s natural to be defensive when an editor tells us that something needs to be changed. But before we get upset when we first open our edits, we need to step back and see the big picture. Editors are not enemies. They want our book to be as good as it can be. Trust them to do their job.
When working on edits I suggest doing to easy things first. Accept a comma insertion, delete a redundant word, re-phrase an awkward sentence, etc. Wait and really think about the things that you want to argue about. If you still feel strongly after honest consideration, then go ahead and email your editor. Tell him politely why you disagree with his suggested change. Try to work out an acceptable solution. A few authors I know on Romance Divas have had to ask for a change in editor. Sometimes an editor and author just don’t mesh. That should be a last resort.
So, I’m off to see what changes my editor has suggested to make Eddie’s Prize the best it can be. Happy Tuesday!
Merry Christmas! A Deleted Scene from Eddie’s Prize
My Tuesday Teaser this week is from Eddie’s Prize, but since it didn’t move Eddie and Lisa’s story forward, it has been removed from the manuscript. That made it the perfect Christmas present for my readers. Let me give you a little set up here. It is early November and Lisa is at the den to visit Carla. Eddie dropped her off there on his way north to visit a friend. The two women are sitting in the room that connects to Carla and Taye’s bedroom. Taye set it aside for Carla’s sole use. As they are sitting and talking about what their married lives are like, Sky comes to the den with Rose, whom he rescued from Two Bears.
    Carla cocked her head to listen to a distant howl. âIs that Taye? Already?â She glanced at her watch. âItâs only half past four. Maybe he finished hunting early.â
    But it wasnât Taye. Agitated voices sounded in the hall, getting closer to the listening women, and a peremptory knock sounded before the door was flung open to admit a tangle of bodies. They poured in like cats dumped out of a sack, all bristling fur, claws and yowls.
    Lisa felt bombarded by the invasion, staring at the people flooding into the room without comprehension at first glance of who they were or even how many there were. To settle herself, Lisa counted them. There was a man a little older than she was, tall and muscular, and barely dressed in cut offs, with black hair loose to his waist. He stood to one side of the door with arms folded over his chest and a grim scowl on his face. Snake hovered beside him, but he looked wide-eyed and anxious rather than grim. A third man wore leather clothes like an Indian in a cowboy movie and his black hair was in two braids. His nose might have had a proud Roman arch at one time, but was grossly bruised and swollen now. He seemed to be under the angry guard of two men who must be wolves whoâd recently changed back to man form, because they were naked. Lisa would have liked to examine their fine physiques at her leisure, but, remembering Eddieâs little lecture, she forced her eyes to the couple who seemed to be the center of this ruckus.
    The man of the pair wasnât actually a man, but a teen-aged boy dressed only in a dark blue wool breechcloth and leather moccasins. His nicely developed body said he was full grown, but his handsome face held a soft boyishness that said high school. His arm was around a young woman, his body leaning toward her as if to shelter her. In contrast to the long black hair that streamed over the young manâs brown-skinned back, the womanâs hair was short and blond, and her skin was the pale sort that probably burned lobster-red after only minutes in the sun. He was tall and slimly muscular, and moved with protective grace. She was of middle height, and her long limbs reminded Lisa of Alexander the coltâs gawky stick legs. Lisa guessed neither of them was over eighteen. The boy pulled the girl further into the room, toward the couch where she and Carla sat.
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Good Bye, Magic Cat
My Tuesday Truth today is: Black Magic Cat has fallen asleep, never to wake again.
I found Magic at the local Humane Society and fell in love with her. I brought her home on December 18, 2004. For eight years she was my writing companion. She was the friendliest cat I’ve ever known. She never met a person or a bowl of food she didn’t like. When I adopted her, I was told she was about 5 or 6 years old. She had health problems from the start, and about two months ago she had a stroke. The vet said then that it was only a matter of time before she died. Yesterday she seemed to lose control of her bodily functions. Today I brought her into the vet, and Dr. Tammy said Magic would never improve. It was my choice, but she said I had to consider Magic’s quality of life. It was hard, but I decided to have Magic put to sleep. I held her and petted her while she fell peacefully asleep. I will miss her. I had already decided that Rose will have a cat in Wolf’s Princess. Don’t be surprised if the cat is named Magic.